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.entry for the contest #4 - Summer
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My god, if I like this ad?
Absolutely!

Think it's an absolutely fabulous work you did here and very professional!
I can't find flaws, it's perfect.

This ad is a new step for this community, hope many can learn from it!

Much congratulations!

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ahh one problem.. i think its a picture of aboriginies not an "african" tribe... :| other than that I like the concept! :D
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To be honest, I don't think this is the strongest of your bunch. Watching a tribal dance isn't really a "seconds matter" issue enough, IMO, to make the connection between reading the ad and time lost. What's more, it makes it sound as if the vacation packages are on your terms, not mine. If I want a vacation, I want to be in control.

Perhaps something more along the lines of "Every normal day at the office is a day you could be absorbing etc. etc." It gives a more one-to-one timeframe and it propels on a more positive impulse.

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